Meaning: The tangles disappear, and the hair becomes smooth and soft like silk.
Choice of Words: Vanish means to disappear completely. Soft means smooth and pleasant to the touch.
Alternative Expressions
Knots disappear, hair feels like a fluffy cloud.
Meaning: This sentence describes how hair becomes smooth and free of knots, like the soft and fluffy texture of a cloud.
Choice of Words: The word "knots" is another term for tangles. "Disappear" means to vanish or become invisible. "Fluffy" describes something that is soft and light. "Cloud" is a fluffy formation in the sky. By comparing the hair to a cloud, the sentence emphasizes how soft and airy it feels.
Hair becomes smooth, like the petals of a flower.
Meaning: This sentence describes how hair becomes smooth and free of tangles, like the soft and delicate texture of flower petals.
Choice of Words: The word "smooth" describes something that is even and free of bumps. "Petals" are the delicate leaves that make up a flower. By comparing the hair to flower petals, the sentence emphasizes how soft and smooth it feels.